Outwitters Fan-Fiction!

[Jack•Sparrow]

(08-12-2012 03:10 PM)Fluffysox Wrote:  At the start, everyone was adorable.

I like that opening sentence...

In my mind though, it goes a lot more like this:

Adorables and Scallywags lived together peacefully, co-existing in their own habitats; the Adorables built themselves cities (Peekaboo) and farmed the nearby fields (Sweetie Plains), while the seafaring Scallywags preferred the ocean (Sharkfood Island) and the beaches (Long Nine).
While the two never warred or fought, they certainly didn't mingle and mostly kept to themselves, each preferring to live with their own kind.

One day, there was a terrible thunderstorm that grew and grew, and with a flash of lightning, a great anomaly tore a hole through the very fabric of space. Their world was changed forever.
Through this hole rode a great mechanical ... Thing! It travelled some distance before landing, and large metal arms anchored it to the ground. It later became known as the Foundry, and from it came waves of mechanical beings. These beings were dubbed Feedback, as their communication often ended in a loud, piercing screech.
They found that much of the world was unfriendly to their needs; the oceans short-circuited them and their optics had trouble registering the colour pink. But surrounding the anomaly, there was little water and even less pink, so they established themselves at the Glitch.
Once they were settled, they began expanding their territory, and began fighting the Scallywags and the Adorables for the rights to the land, for they were power-hungry and wanted the whole world for themselves.

Now, the Adorables only knew that the Feedback came from a storm, and that the only storms they had heard of or seen before, occurred close to the seas and were things only the Scallywags were adept in. As such, they suspected the Scallywags were behind the invasion, and distrusted them greatly.
The Scallywags, however, knew that great buildings and constructs like the Foundry, were the sole domain of the more settled Adorables, and similarly accused them of starting this war.

For these reasons, the Adorables and Scallywags defend themselves against the Feedback threat, and are willing to wage war on each other for introducing the Feedback to the world. And of course, in a bid to control the world, the Feedback fight the Adorables and the Scallywags until their victory is achieved.